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托福独立口语高频话题
Describe a day that you enjoy the most or is the most special to you.
学生对此话题的表述答案
I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result.That day is very special for me,most importantly,that's because it's a good proof that allthe hard work in my high school is deserved.I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of my junior high.It's very tireless and exhausted to me,but I insisted it and I finally got the good score,what's more,I think it is also means I will have a very bright future,because I can go to the best university in our country.That would give me a better chance to find a good job.
批改意见
语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)
1 for me————to me
2 the good score————a good score
表达部分存在的问题(Expression)
1 most importantly,that's because————more importantly,it is…
2 good proof to prove————proof
3 the hard work in my high school is deserved————the hard work in high school was rewarded
4 junior high————high school
5 tireless————tiresome
6 insisted————persevered
高频话题高分口语模板
I still remember the day I got my college entrance exam result.That day is very special to me.Most importantly,it is proof that all the work in high school was rewarded.I have worked more than 15 hours a day in the last year of high-school.It was very tiresome and exhausting to me,but I persevered and I finally got a good score.What's mroe,I think it also means that I will have a very bright future,because I can go to the best university in our country,and that will give me a better chance to find a good job.