托福独立口语高频话题：谁应该对孩子的教育更负责，学校还是父母?

托福独立口语高频话题：谁应该对孩子的教育更负责，学校还是父母?

托福独立口语高频话题

Who should be more responsible for children's education,schools or parents?

学生对此话题的表述答案

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's educations.For me,that I think that the school should be more responsible for children's educations.First,that childrens spend a large amount of time in school,and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and teach the knowledge.And therefore,I think that children is more influenced by the schools and so school should be more responsible for teach students to educate the childrens.

批改意见

语法方面出现的错误(Grammar)

1 educations————education

2 childrens spend————children spend

3 children is————children are

4 and therefore————Therefore

表达部分存在的问题(Expression)

1 for childrens education(delete)

2 For me,I think————I think

3 and teach the knowledge————and be knowledgable

高频话题高分口语模板分享

Although both the schools and parents should be responsible for children's education,I think that the school should be more responsible.First,children spend a large amount of time in school,and the school's function is to teach students how to behave and be knowledgable.Therefore,I think the children are more influenced by the schools.Schools should be more responsible to educate the children.